Many thanks again for your honest critique, it was very helpful.
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Please send on my thanks to Lorraine Mace for the helpful and constructive comments.
Please pass on my thanks to Lorraine Mace for her critique on my work. I very much appreciate her comments and advice which I will use in my writing in the future.
Many thanks for forwarding Lorraine Mace’s very helpful critique of my story. I shall work on the plot layers for both this story and others. I also found the link she provided for guidance on presentation very useful, since I’ve never had this type of help before.
Many thanks for this, and please pass on my thanks also to Lorraine Mace. Her critique is, as always, very much appreciated.
Could you pass on a big thank you to Lorraine for the critique, I can learn a lot from her comments.
Thank you for your detailed feedback. I wasn’t disheartened in the least by your critique; in fact I found it very encouraging. I began writing, or trying to write, in September last year, and in December I decided to stop hiding behind my computer screen. I’m not one for self delusion; I know where I am right now with regards to writing, and I also know I can’t get better without professional feedback and guidance.
Please pass my thanks for this very helpful critique to Lorraine.
Thank you for the critique. Please pass on my thanks to Lorraine Mace for her excellent suggestions.
I really appreciated your critique and have taken note. I will work on the story over time and see how it improves.