Thanks very much for the feedback- really useful! I’m a total beginner when it comes to writing fiction, hence the basic mistakes. Lots to learn, but really appreciate the critique.
Comments by recipients of Flash 500 critiques
Thank you very much for the critique. I found your comments and suggestions extremely useful, thank you.
Thank you for this valuable critique. I agree with nearly all your points and perhaps this story is more suited to a longer word limit so that the characters can be fleshed out.
Thank you for the thoughtful and helpful critique. I will bear your advice in mind and keep working on my weaknesses (and improving my strengths, I hope!)
Another great crit, thanks. I do feel I’m inching forward each time! Now going to reread a ‘chatty’ short story I’ve just finished to see if I can root out any lurking ‘telling’!
Thank you so much for your critique, tips and useful comments. I have only just started to find the time to write, although I have been wanting to for many years, so your feedback was really lovely and inspirational.
Thanks for such an encouraging and detailed critique. Great help.
Thank you for my critiques. You have been very thorough and given me lots to think about before I submit my entries for the next Flash500 competition. I have a friend who also writes but refuses to submit anything for critique, which I think is a real shame. You can learn so much from professional advice.
I’m very new to writing stories and your insights are both excellent and helpful. And good value for money too.
t’s a really useful critique with lots of ideas where I can make improvements.